Yes, I'm still reading this. Sorry I haven't been reviewing, I've just been so absorbed with my own story. But anyway.
I love it. The Gerard thing ("Hey-it-turns-out-your-greatest-enemy-is-in-love-with-you!") was a bit of a surprise, but oddly it made sense.
More soon, please!
Author's response
That's ok. I'm good with you being engrosed in your own story! It means I get to read more of it!
Yeah I don't know where that twist came from but it was too good to throw away!
Thanks for reviewing!