You described this chapter really well in the end, actually. I'm still in 'awww' mode. '"Hey..." said a weak voice, "trying to take advantage of me while I'm unconscious or something?"' that line did this to me!
So we now know that Gee has enhanced healing abilities, which would make him an excellent fighter, I guess? But I still can't believe nothing happened to him , Mauritius said 'do it' and they must have done something to him - they couldn't have just turned around and left!
And Frankie's powers are definitely on their way, yay!!!
I've never watched Charmed but I'm a Harry Potter geek, too - I mean really, I even wrote a letter to Rowling once!
Hopefully quick review?
Author's response
Very quick review =)
Lol, i liked that line cute too.
You should download Charmed, if you liked Angel, you'd probably like it too! I loved Phoebe even though she had the suckiest powers.
Next chapter will be up when i finish fixing it up.
xoxo