New rule: I'm not allowed to read your stuff while drinking. You owe me a new monitor for this one:
"So, let me get this striaght, Sebastian chew with your mouth closed..."
:P
I really like how you write Maria. It's completely and utterly a woman speaking. :D I'm looking forward to the next chapter because I want to know a little more about Rachel and Bobbi. It's turning into a good little story. :)
Author's response
thank you so much. i've watched the skid row videos and the i married sebastian bach thing on vh1 and saw how he acts sometimes and thought of how i would handle him. i don't know i guess it's how she would react too. the next chapter is rachel's girl to girl oh, i mean guy, ( i couldn't help it) talk. a lot will come out then.