Pretty amazing. A few minor grammar problems, but good nonetheless. We're only human, mistakes are made. :]
I have to say though, this is a bit of a 'what the fuck -raises eyebrow & cocks head to side-' type of chapter.
Lol. Keep going because this is slightly confusing.
And if you won't continue I'll poke you with my metal spork until you do.
Hehe. Virtual treat for a good job though? -holds out virtual treat basket-
(^_^)