Aww, that sucks. I hate Peyton (Is that how you spelled it?) and I hate Joe for not letting Patrick ask Maddie, and I hate Patrick for asking Peyton, and I hate Pete-- Wait, I don't hate Pete. He's the only person in this story I don't hate, besides Maddie. I just feel bad for Maddie.
Anyways, you've gotten me hooked. Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.
Author's response
Haha. You won't hate Peyton later. She's not supposed to be a bad charachter, and she doesnt cause much drama in the story.
but ok