Great chapters...i love it...can't wait for more...and it would be really cool if you made your chapters a little longer....i mean it's okay if you don't i just thought it would be better!
Author's response
I actually try to make my chapters longer, but they always come out short.... well, I know they'll start to get longer as i go, sort of like how the first harry potter book is tiny, and then the second is bigger, and then the third is bigger than that, and the fourth is bigger than the third, and yeah..... you know what i mean.