Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) sparky40sw 2008-01-22

excellent chapter - I am glad that the 'encouragement to loquacity (spelling?)of Draco was off stage - but it could not have been close to what he deserved or he would be obviously and messily dead.
loved the vignette with Luna - she is a wonderful character, and I truly enjoy how clear headed your version is.

thanks again for sharing your talent
Ken

Author's response

- Draco's a jackass who forgot that the women have wands too. I suspect Dad's example here.

- Luna is a lot of fun to write. I'm trying to come up with a all Luna all the time vehicle for her.