Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) Meteoricshipyards 2008-01-23

I don't know how, but you've put out several chapters since the last time I read this. Still good; very good. Love the way Dumbles is building towards a very big fall. I hope Voldie is getting worried.

Thanks for writing this. It's very enjoyable.

Tom A.

Author's response

- like Dumbles, Tommy is far too arrogant to be worried. I've come up with a solution to the Tommy problem that I've never seen used before (which given the sheer mass of fan fiction does not mean the idea is original, just that I haven't seen it.) I'm predicting that about 20 percent of the readers will be totally pissed at me, 20 percent will like it, and the rest will tell me it was stupid.