Review for The Acts Of Betrayal

The Acts Of Betrayal

(#) Cateagle 2008-01-24

Hmm, I figured there was something throwing the two youngest Weasleys off, but I'd expected it to "just" be some mind manipulation by Dumbles, not sheer neglect of their mental health by him, even in the name of "the greater good". Between Dumbles' manipulations here and what he's allowed/condoned Snivellus and his merry band of rapists to do, I daresay neither his nor Slytherin House's reputation is going to have much, if anything, left; it's a certainty that Snape will be going down with the rest, especially now that the solid evidence has been passed to Madame Bones.

I wonder if Tommy-boy is going to appreciate it when so many of his "snakes" fall? OTOH, it'd be amusing if he was ticked-off at them for besmirching the name of Slytherin (really, I could just see him being that arrogant and blind to his own faults).

One "interesting" non-killing means of dealing with both Tom and Albus would be to find a way to strip them of their magic and then confine them to a muggle insane asylum since their talk of magic would make them clearly delusional.

Author's response

- The image of Tommy getting upset at the thought of rape is tickling me... It's out of character for this story but might be fun later...

- You're reading too many of my fics.