I still love it, and it was as good as I expected. And I'm glad you changed it to "The Sixth Sense" it's a movie I've seen, so I knew what was going on. ^^
Great job, building the drama and whatnot, I loved this chapter, and I love your story. I was signing onto the internet to go to the dictionary site for my own story, but I had ot check my mail, so I ended up readin instead of writing. Anyways, back to writing, and I hope you're writing as well. Love this story!