Wtf? Please, no more. There was absolutly no plot, and loads of spelling mistakes. What are you, eight? And if you are, why are you writing smut anyway, not only is is bad, it's pointless! No more please, and get some spelling lessons while you're at it! I know I sound harsh but god, that was Frerard Teenie Smut, and that's the worst kind of story!
-Miranda
Author's response
Ooh, dude, harsh! :)