it's cute, and nice and fluffy, and good-
just one thing- they're american and are using british expresions which can be annoying. Otherwise pretty great
Author's response
yeah sorry but like... I'm English. There is a warning on my profile that says that that'll probably show in my writing. To be fair I wouldn't expect an American writer to have to stop writing every 3 seconds to check their slang if they were writing a fic about an English band.
Sorry for the rant... Thanks for taking the time to read and review.