Before seeing the lovely email in my inbox that informs me when your story is updated, i read another story on here, i supposed Frerard story. It was the worst story i have ever read, but i won't be rude and say the name of it. I wasn't sure if i wanted to kill myself or the author after i read it... the writing, the plot, the story, the character were awful.
Thank God for writers like you. I love your story so much. It is so well written that it leaves me wanting more (and not wanting to kill anyone lol).
This chapter was fantastic. The concert, the way the guys are going back to their "old" selves... its the end of the black parade just like in real life.
I also have to say that you are a talented song writer. I especially like the beginning-middle of the song that is sung in the concert. Very emotional.
Sorry this is so fucking long, but once i start, i can't shut up until its all said. Hope you don't mind.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter... and praying i don't run into anymore awful stories!
By the way... I'm going to rate this chapter. If i could rate it 5 times, i would! =)
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Author's response
Oh, wooooooowwww! :D:D:D I don't remember feeling so flattered before, I mean ever! I'm actually at a loss for words to describe how I feel, right now.
I'm just gonna say that I read your review two times when I first saw it in my inbox a few minutes ago, then I came over here to respond, read it all over once again, once again and when I finish responding I think I'm gonna read it one more time xD ( sounds a little pathetic, I know, but that's how much I liked it!)
I'm just so glad to know that you appreciate my writing, really, it gives me the biggest morale boost! Because I love the way you write, too, and knowing that someone whose writing skills I adore, likes the way I write and knowing that you don't read many stories except Frerards (like me) but you like this one is just... I don't have the word again :) And now, I'm actually gonna write more lyrics, too!!!
And about the long review thing, I don't mind at all, you could write longer and I would actually be happier =) (You know my reviews are usually long, too.)
Thanks for the rating and I totally sympathize with you about awful stories, I've come across a few and I know the feeling. We can only hope that the authors will try to improve themselves, cause that's what I always try to do...
By the way, my storie's in your alerts? Yay!!!
MUCH LOVE