Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) BARON1941 2008-02-03

Very good chapter i really enjoy your writing it is very entertaining.Ifor one really like the flashbacks as they show us how harry has become the person he is now in this story as opposed to canon harry besides it allows you to put tony, pepper rhodey, etc. in the story which is great.Man dumbles nedds to change his name to bumbledore could he have handledanything with less tact and class and he excuse harry of being rude go figure. Anyway i really enjoyed your story more soon please.
Baron