I have fallen in love with your writing, not only this story but others as well.
This particular sentence needs something though...it just isn't right:
"In deed Min. I am having trouble believing it, but considering the source..." Filius Flitwick was as angry. "This is a reflection on us all." This from a man who regularly demonstrated to the occasional student (usually but not always, Slytherin) not to mistake stature for power was furious.
Could I suggest:
This from a man who regularly demonstrated to the occasional student (usually but not always, Slytherin) not to mistake stature for power; he was furious.
Author's response
- Fixing it now. Thanks