Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) dennisud 2008-02-06

I really like the mix of genre's here and the lower key the Marvel characters are here as they could have overwhelmed the Potter reality quite handily.

The change of effect tthe polt has with Harry & Hermione being in Ravenclaw sure takes things to a whole different direction. I can see How Luna's entry the next year will be 'interesting' to say the least.

Also I really would have loved Hermione with Harry and as it seems Padma. But I think a Certain unique Ravenclaw might have an eventual hold in Harry's heart.

Great yarn!

dennisud

Author's response

- As I've told people who want Ironman to showup and hurt people the Story is about Harry, with touches of the Marvel Mythos... The Marvel characters are window dressing, not really the story.

- Luna is going to join the crew, but not be a ship. I'm planning on this fic to not have a ship. The characters will date (each other and others), think they are deeply in love (and be wrong), and even experiment with sex, but Life Long Relationships aren't going to happen, even their final year they will only be 17-18 years old, a period of time when the vast majority of people can't pour piss out of a boot with directions written on the heel.