This is really good and original, and I think you should keep going!
It's nice to see different takes on classic storylines, but meeting Jack the Camera Guy's - it took me five minutes to work out who Jack was before I got past the first paragraph - Sister and seeign what she does...and the whole Gabe Princess thing and the silly string crime...perfect!
Update soon?
xox Emmi
Author's response
Thanks for the review!
I'll be updating soon :)
Don't worry
Any ideas though?
Xoxo stevie