a motherfucking cliffhanger.
bitches with knives and bats and not-so-nice expressions on their faces.
i don't like the fact that i don't know her well enough to predict what's she's gonna do next. is she gonna run? well she'd be insane if she tried to fight back. if gerard arrives with his car, could she be stubborn enough to not get in? how far is she willing to go...
i know she doesn't want to accept any help frmo 'geetard' but is 6 armed bitches enough to change her mind?
i really hope gerard appears, just so i'd get the answers to my stupid questions.
Author's response
your review kinda bothered me...not like bothered me cause it was awesome but the context bothered me...I mean, is there something I should've done differently so you could've predicted her reaction and I didn't? or is it just because it's still pretty early into the story? do reader like to know the character through and through or is a certain air of mystery is important to keep them on the edge of their seat?