Review for Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

Harry Potter and The Invincible Technomage

(#) melferd 2008-02-12

Greetings! Sorry I've been out of the world, I'm catching up on my fic.

*Iz ded from Harry/Tony/Daddy cute*
Really, though, you took what could have been a twee scene, and made it sweet and tender.
I vote to keep flashbacks on the island!! They are a vital part of the story, and funny as hell for the most part. (giggles at memory of Reed flinching at Harry's break in time)
The only good part of being so behind on my reading is catching up and getting bunches of chapters at once.
Excelsior, big guy!!

Author's response

- Never apologize for RL. It eats us all.

- I believe the people have spoken, the Flash backs remain, though I will probably start using few of them per chapter.