This is just so cute! It's good to see a well written story like this that is kind of surprising, if you know where I'm trying to come from.
Unfortunately, I have no idea for a title still, and I can't really help you unless you tell me where you're trying to take it. if you still need help, e-mail me. ems_mcd@yahoo.com.au or irokmysexcworld_luv@hotmail.com
Update soon?
xox Emmi
P.S. u rock!
Author's response
thanks hun :)
i think i've kinda got the pace going now
i've written a fair bit more on Word
so i'll be updating as soon as possible
it's always nice to get reviews!
(especially if you havent been writing for very long)
:D