You took long time to update and I was afraid you abandoned the story. Thank Merlin you din't.
Yeah, Dumbledore seemed the sorry figure but then became directly responsible for killing Nott. Though at that point story seemed rushed and I had to read to twice to understand what was going on.
Harr is in castle. Is it term end or Harry has left the castle? A bit confusing so not sure.
So all bad guys are together to defeat Harry eh? I hope that you don't plan to kill anyone Harry loves. He's had enough of that.
I think it's time that Harry slowly takes over ministry from inside. He may be independent but I think ministry still listens (sheeple) to ministry. So, maybe a foothold in the stronger points in ministry? Like Harry's people as heads and so on? it's totally political and shouldn't be ignored. Just MY thoughts.
Please update soon. Smut and 5000 words? YAY.
I like smut but was glad that you decided on a chapter without smut (no consecutive chapters though. please). It was interesting change.
What do you plan to do about Dumbledore? Oh and how about girls in OTHER houses? I mean Harry now has a stronghold in Gryffin and Slytherin but what about other houses (even though Luna and Susan are there). Just wondering.
Author's response
End of term? It's a weekend. I wrote it pretty clearly, i think. The death of Nott was brief, because that was sort of the point. Dumbles can't make snap decisions anymore.
If i mix more girls in at this point, i won't have a chance of keeping it all straight. There are too many as it is. Perhaps the Them can help me with that...
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