too fast and too many cliches... i mean u had him do soooo much in just one chapter, without any detail description or any outlook into his emotions... plus there were some holes in the story as well...
i don't mean to discourage u, becuase the story has potential, especially if you mean to finish it, and not abandon it half way.. but u have to slow down and plan the chapters out a bit better....
anyway, hope to see mor soon, or even a revision of this chapter would be good.