Hmmm... I really like it! Its a good beginning and plot. I could take a break from all the smut im reading.lol. But yeah id like to hear more. Thanks! -Lindsey Lachrymosa
Author's response
thnx! its my first time writing a fan fiction so i dont really know what i'm doing =D i just write whts on my mind... i will be continuing this one. thnx for reviewing!