Skin is nice; and people enjoying themselves even better. Complements to the chef.
That said, I am enjoying your story a lot.
You must have a plot line, cause all new lines appear with at appropriate time. All plots , main, and small interior, fit and make sense. You even have convoluted ones (my favorite) but their understandable.
You have introduced many things, always with proper explanation and closed them off neatly (ie: bike race, Goddesses and Gods, and much more).
Definitely an enjoyable read. I look forward to seeing where you go with this.
May the MUSE be with you!!!
Author's response
Thanks.
Reviews like this makes me blush and feel much smarter than i am. Some string the sub-plots along like beads on a thread. I prefer the braid-like structure, where there's always at least three going at different paces, leading the main one along. Except for that basic idea, i just write the pieces that has to go where i put them. Simple, really.
Erm. I must have read thousands of fanfics, and not one have ended where this one will end. Stay tuned.
Vanir