OMG!! That was a kickin' first chapter. Are you taking a page from the Indiana Jones school of scene pacing?
Awesome start, I LOVE the DE's getting so publically spanked, and their sheep getting exposed and judged was great. I feel that the fringe Death Eaters get off too easy in regular cannon/fannon. You are slowly converting my DH to the HP side of the force, as he is a big comic buff. Thanks for the new, looking forward to seeing how this one drives.