well it's just that i like to know things. but then again, if you wrote down the story of her life, i wouldn't like that. this is just me being impatient. however, i like your style and i wouldn't have it any other way. that's what keeps me addicted. and i think that's what keeps the other readers addicted too.
viola is kind of a narrator in this story and it would be rather odd to have her think about herself that much. i don't know how to explain it but uhm.. let's put it like this: if you did tell us every detail even remotely related to viola, it would seem like she was mentally writing an autobiography. and that's not a good thing. it greta that we learn new things about her, aswell as the other characters, within every new chapter.
like i said, i'm just being impatient.
that, and the fact that jacob likes to complain.
Author's response
Oh I get it now, I just freaked cause I took it as...um like I dunno like I wasn't doing a good job introducing the charechters but now I get it.