wow. he didn't notice the bruises and the cuts and stuff? the word carved on her skin?
damn those horny guys.
i don't usually pick my favorite chapters but so far, this is the best chapter. they're all great, but this one was just excellent. i'm slowly starting to get used to her way of thinking. i promised i wouldn't compare these characters to the ones in you can keep my brother but her way of thinking is quite different from skyler's. i know it's hard for an author to create different characters, different personalities. especially when Viola is the "i" of the story. it's written from her point of view so you really have create her mind. you have to create her brains and make them work in whatever twisted way they should.
Author's response
I know! stupid horny guys! But in his defence I must say it was dark...
It's hard to create a new whole world especially when you have another story kinda hanging above you but I try my best