(#) Treck 2006-07-27
It's a good read so far however... You need to add a line between paragraphs to make it easier to read.
Author's response
i have all the editing, space between paragraphs and indentions etal, but i lose it when i post... if you know how to make the editing translate i'll go back and repost the chapters, let me know... that would be great.