Review for The Day My Life Changed Completly

The Day My Life Changed Completly

(#) another_disaster 2008-02-17

this is a really cool story
it happens really fast though so its weird
you know.
but hey i like it anyway

Author's response

oops i didnt know i was going fast! i'll try to slow down a bit. tell me if i improve with that thnx for letting me know!