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You know I got a sudden idea halfway through the first paragraph. Maybe her parents are swingers? like with the ways. I mean its possible. and its not something that they would openly discuss with the kids.
Then it wouldnt really be cheating that her mom is doing and the parents 'happy' marriage isnt really an illusion is it? hmmm. I dunno. I think it was the line about them having private sex related jokes that put the idea in my head. and then the end where her dad and mrs way were standing together.

Anyway it was a really really good scene with Gee. You portrayed him well. The jealousy was all over it but not so obvious. It wasnt screaming. He handled it well.
And v's obvious obliviouslness (is that a word?) I mean it was great at how she had not a clue why he was being the way he was. She sorta brushed it off where if she looked deeper she mightve seen his feelings for her.
I think the most powerful part was trying to imagine what Gee was thinking. Trying to infer it from his words and his actions. God knows what he was thinking about but I get the feeling it was in total contradiction to his actions. Unless again, just my imagination. but he said "--somthing-" Flatly and it made me wonder what he was thinking but didnt add on.
They both sorta attack with sarcasm to defer the attention from the their feelings and its interesting to watch.
Instead of him being like Oh V I heart you. Be my girl. Hes like that fuckers too old for you. Damn.
Why cant he just say I want you.
But then again, I dont know that he does. I like to think he does cause hes Gee and hes the hero and I like to imagine that at the end theyre gonna be together but I dunno.