Are you serious? You got like 6 reviews for your last chapter. I've been getting like...four for mine. Consider yourself lucky, dude.
This is absolutely not getting worse.
It's just as awesome as I said it was at the beginning, and your writing's improved a lot too.
So...don't get discouraged.
Awesome chapter, and fuck, Gerard? Car accident? Nooooonooooonooo!
Also-- I feel a little bad for Jack. He never really did anything wrong.
Author's response
I really am grateful, everyone is great!
I was just a bit worried that people had stopped liking it as much..
And thanks, the whole reason i write is to improve :D Its great that people notice.