Oh I love it!!!
The whole story...its wonderful. Perfectly wonderful. I love it to pieces.
I dont particularly like the ending to this chapter...it seems very coincidental, but im guessing you'll fix that in the next one.
So update now!!
I mean...please?? :)
Author's response
Hi there broken wings,
Thanks so much for the review!!!
Which part did you find coincidental? Bob being knocked out again or Sam kissing his forehead. Well because you asked so nicely I decided to put up the next chapter.
Thanks again and see what happens!!!