Review for Blood
I love your writing style. It's super awesome, especially in part one. Amazing job on that.
Can I be completely honest, though? I hope you don't get mad...
After reading the first part (the ending), I was kind of like, "Wait, Gerard's dead? Then what's in part 2?"
Except then you updated this chapter...but um...
I actually thought it was better without part two... it's more moving, more powerful, you know? Unless, you know, you're strictly against sad stories. It's your choice. If you wanted fluffy stuff, this is perfect.
Author's response
actually...
that's an idea
I'm not personally against sad stories
though I'm not sure with this one
hmmm...
I shall think about that
thank you