Oh my dear. I do believe I have become literally addicted to your story.
I read this last night, and you kept me hanging right on my seat. I almost screamed/cried in desperation when I went to click the 'next chapter' button, and it wasn't there. Alas, that is when you realise, you have written a bloody brilliant story.
Your technique is very well-developed, and as a critic/beta reader, I found it hard to find any mistakes whatsoever. Your unique way with descriptions is very appealing to the reader, which is essential (and I can tell from the reviews that you have succeeded in such area), and your characters are also appealing, and I find them rather enjoyable.
Alas, my short critique is done, and therefore, you should update as soon as possible. You have me wrapped around your finger (bloody American girl, you), and I shall be checking everyday for an update. So, toodle along and finish the next chapter! :]
xoxo, orie
Author's response
Oh! blushesblushesblushes
Thank you so much! You have no idea how much reviews like that make me smile. I was almost worried that I had wrote a rather boring story, so I'm surprised at how many people are actually liking this story!
Not to mention, I was wondering if I'd made any mistakes, so don't hesitate and tell me if I do. (my beta still hasn't gotten back to me for the prologue ;~;, so it might have errors)
The next chapter should be up in a couple of days, I'm almost finished!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!