I should totally fly to California right now and smack the back of Patrick's head with a rolled up newspaper! Then I remember this is fiction! What he think he doing fleeing the State saying nothing to his girl? Great chapters, I dont think its possible for you guys to suck, you got talent.
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Its chapter 25. Read it. Comment. You know we love you.
Kay&Kai