Hey mate, I really like this... story, if you could call it that way, but I have only ONE small request:
Don't you DARE change the pairing Harry/Daphne to ANYTHING else. I prefer said pairing over ANY OTHER PAIRING, and sadly enough, I just know 2 fics that are that way, yours and "The Machine".
Keep up the good work, and hope to read more from you in the future!