omgomgomg yaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyy!!
im happy you used the sketchpad bit, cos i dont have anywhere to use it.
oh and thank for reading mine... no one has reviewed apart from you and a freind of mine from school. i shall keep on reviewing yours, dont worry about that.
for the next chapter, you could have gerard walking in, and then he and frankie have a fight, for a little extra added drama. or bob. bob would be funny.
this is a great chapter. i promise you i shall not stop reading. i would feel bad then. :D