I am thoroughly enjoying this story. while the premisis is familiar, the details are quite original. Love Monster. Also that Seamus and Dean are primary characters. I get sooooo tired of Hermione saving the day!
Author's response
Yes, I read a few of them and then decided to write my own. There are plenty of cliches but hopefully enough originality and not so many cliches as to make it intolerable. Seamus and Dean are only primary characters for now, that will change as my little plot unfolds. Not to worry, while there will not be huge amounts of Hermione-bashing she will by no means be saving the day. Thanks for the review.