Good plot so far. I wish you would hurry it up a bit though. When you say Harry/Many I am assuming all girls go with him. Although I wonder if that'd be a quickie or something permanent. Oh well, wait and see I guess.
I do hope that you don't plan to forgive the boys and make Harry go all guilty and stuff. Boys should deserve what they got. Make Harry good but not saint. Like the way he din't do anything about Bill throwing all blame on him.
I think it might be a good idea to answer the reviews. It shows readers that author infact values their review.
Just MY thoughts