(#) koppe 2008-04-06
Great start, and an interesting twist. The only thing, is that there are some bad spelling - mostly similar sounding words.
So Harry has grown-up knowing he's a wizard and perhaps trained a bit. On the bad side, Voldemort has been rampaging alle that time.
What about Neville? Is he alive? What about his parents? Is he the boy-who-lived (well, survived a confrontation with Voldemort, perhaps)?
Harry seems to retain some memories from the "normal" HP-universe, especially Hermione it seems. Will he befriend her right from the bat - and perhaps not befriend Ron at all (or Ron doesn't want to).
What about the money, titles, lines and so on? After all, he is James' son, and the only(?) living Potter. Will he be able to claim his inheritance/title directly - eg. from the Goblins? Will Dumbledore give some of it back as long as he dance to his pipe?
Will he end-up being "marked" in some way by Voldemort, thus triggering the prophecy?
How will the wizarding-world welcome Harry and Lilly (bastard... gold-digger... but at the same time, a hope to defeat Voldemort and the last surviving of an old line)?
What about Rose... would be fun if Petunia and Vernon had a magical child...
Keep up the good work, and please update soon!