Review for One Man Army

One Man Army

(#) cj_cold 2008-04-07

Interesting concept.

The use of the RoR is a little Dues Ex Machina for my taste, but not a bad idea.

The idea of a clone army of Harry Potter's is interesting. Sound like something out of a Snape nightmare though. Maybe an Omake with Snape having a Force premonition. "Their is a disturbance in the force, it was as if millions of Gryffindors were born"

Do wonder how the clones will learn to focus their magic without wands. Unless the Kamino's can use the feather from his wand to clones lots of Phoenixes to give more feathers.

Would be nice if Harry and his clones could figure out apparition for tactical mobility.

Wonder if Harry and the clones army will still be around in a few years when Naboo kicks off. That might be really interesting.

Maybe Padme as a pairing?

Voldemort and his DE's don't stand a chance.

Author's response

I think I put it on my AN, this story is set 10 years before the Invasion of Naboo. This will allow Harry to create some chaos within the galaxy. This also allows me to tap into dead characters in Star Wars that died by time of Episode 1. Harry won't be able to use much magic seeing he'll probably be shot before he can finish his spells. Remember, he's 14 years old. That means his knowledge of spells have been greatly reduced to a few handful. He'll gain new abilities along with his troops. Also the troopers will not get wands, can you imagine fawkes seeing an army of Harry going after his feathers? Hey! That would make a nice Omake! Harry will get his new abilities soon along with some good battle experience.