This looks pretty good so far. I like HP/SW crossovers but sadly there's not many out there. I think it's pretty cool that he landed on Kamino and I like him getting his own clone army. It would be cool if Harry got to explore more of the Star Wars Universe.
Later,
Isebas
Author's response
Harry won't come back to his own world for quite some time. Most of his time in Star Wars galaxy will be engaged in wars.