Review for One Man Army

One Man Army

(#) Cateagle 2008-04-08

An army of female Harry's? That could get rather interesting, and disturbing (heh, could make for some erotic fantasies, too). Now, imagine a research team of cloned Hermione's.

Meanwhile, the background to the action slowly develops as forces gather.

Oh, one small typo, "...I was afraid that you would not regain unconsciousness.” should be "...I was afraid that you would not regain consciousness.”

Author's response

Not exactly an army, just merely a legion. thanks for the correction, I'll fix it up soon. I'm not putting Herminone with clones. A little too much for me at the moment.