Review for One Man Army

One Man Army

(#) Vanir 2008-04-08

Nice, nice. Perhaps all the clones should be female? On second thought, let's not. Imagine a PMS-ing army. shudder
Well, that could of course be ignored. "Harry and the Harriers"?
A good way to differentiate beteen the commander and the troops, and good for avoiding the otherwise inevitable mix'n'switch-situations.
Oh, and don't overdo the training scenes. They always makes "eye of the tiger" come to mind, and i hate that song.
Good work.

Vanir

Author's response

I'll only have one legion of Female Harry to 'serve' him Ku Ku Ku. The rest will consist of male clones troopers. As for your idea about the advanced wands, I will consider it. I've never thought of it that way before.