Sorry to say this but I noticed a ton of typos and spelling errors ('witch' instead of 'which' and 'where' instead of 'were' being the most common) so you really need to proofread as some of them do interfere with enjoying the story.
Apart from that, I'm quite excited to see what the heck is happening in jolly old England. I must admit I'm curious about what you're doing with the characters and what's happening to this world's Harry.
Cheers