Review for One Man Army

One Man Army

(#) Cateagle 2008-04-13

I like the build-up this chapter gives for the first battle. I'd have to agree with cj_cold and tomcool, victory but at a price and, in response to all the death around them, an affirmation of life as Harry and ACC-07, or some female, indulge in some hot and heavy sex as soon as circumstances permit. Since she's a commander, I'd suggest Athena as the name for ACC-07.

I'll also agree with cj_cold that it would be interesting to see various recessive traits in Harry's genome - his father's eye color, his mother's hair color, etc. show up in the clones despite them being "identical". These should be defects in the cloning process itself rather than defects in the parties they appear in.

Author's response

At the moment, I suck at smut!! T.T as much as I love to read some, I cannot write smut for crap. As for the answer about the different trait subject, please read my responce to CJ_Cold's review for my reason and answer. IF Vanir want's to he can write the smut for this story.