very good chapter, i agree with einuom that it is slightly short but that doesnt matter. I like how you described the other Clone majors i can see lots of building from them and whats in this chapter. from my original comment you replied about not knowing weather to bash GinnyHermione, personally any story that does is usually a good read except the thousands that have ginny in an arranged marriage with him and hermione spying for Dumbles.
Author's response
I will probably make Hermione into a hard ass conservative that reject the belief in the force. As for Ginny, she will probably have an insane fangirl obsession with him/male clones. As for Ron, jealousy shall be his fault. As for dumbles, manipulative and ruthless. Both of them will most likely die from this.