Very interesting and I like the little plot hooks sprinkled through out. The past life of Harry will be interesting to watch unfold. I'm curious to see if Lily's "fictional" history has had an impact on Bella's outlook on life. What will happen to Pansy during the holiday break. The Dumbledore inheritance issue will be interesting to watch unfold. I am also looking forward to seeing your vision of a magical Britain that has been at war for about 30 years. Even the little plot hook about Pavratti's scar is intriguing.
quite good even without a copy editor. The originality is outstanding bring a freshness even to plot lines that have been overworked.