Hell yeah, this story is really amazing! I sometimes think you have this weird grudge against your Frank and Gerard but you write wonderful drama so... You should definitely keep writing it! But, you know, you might like to let us see a flicker of light here and there :P And normal people are like the way you write them usually, at least I know a lot of people that would say "I love you" and then turn it into "I love you as a friend", so... It's in a way realistic, too.
And just wow, I wasn't expecting you'd pull the dream trick on us. I was really shocked to see Frank had been daydreaming, hehe =)
So I say keep up the good work! Cause you are a really good writer and I believe when you finish this story, it's gonna be epic. I,for one, have never seen a story that gets so much reviews and ratings before...
Believe in yourself :)
Author's response
Whoa. I just got home after the crappiest day ever and I read this, and I'm all...smiley all of a sudden. And I swear to you, I love you. Well I love you as much as a person can love another person over the internet. You've been like...awesome, througout. So thank you.
But see, the problem is, I have no idea how to wrap it up. Because, I don't wanna totally bum people out and kill anyone off, but it seems so cheesy to have all the drama and suspense I just built up to END with Gerard and everyone else being perfect and happy, as if this whole thing never happened. So, it'll have to be an epic without an ending, if anything. But I hope I think of some conclusion because initially, I loved this idea.
I don't think people go back to read author's replies a lot, so I probably just rambled to myself...but anyway, thanks.