A wonderful original story. I giggled throughout it. Monster was great, the stinking boy smell wonderful and the shear amount of charms on Harry forseeable. What is to stop someone in that world from tracing anyone? Your point about how Harry should have been given his houselife before Hogwarts was always something I thought overlooked, why would someone change so much? Can't wait for more.
Author's response
I'm so very sorry about my incredibly late reply, but thank you for your lovely review. Yes I always thought there were many gaps in the cannon I could exploit for my story. Hope you like the newer chapters :)